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Yay, my first submission. Well, this was the first drawing I managed to finish coloring, haha. She's suppose to be a character in a manga I'm working on (but I'm probably gonna modify her a little) I wanted to add a background but it turned sorta crappy so I didn't want to waste my time.

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:iconbubb-lee:
Wow! Great job!

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:iconunknown111981:
nice work
looks really good
:iconredmoonjack:
Awsome,like the pose. :D

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I shot the Ice cream man!!!! :P
:iconxebi:
Great so far. If you added a background of some sort it'd look even better :aww:

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:iconthepioden:
Ok, you mentioned wanting concrit, so here goes.
First off, BEAUTIFUL coloring. Really supurb. Also, I love the character design, and the linework is wonderfully smooth and clean. Dyniamic pose as well, and much love for the hair.
Only thing I would keep in mind in future: the hands look a bit akward, especially the one in front of her chest. Her wrist looks like it would be in an uncomfortable position. Perhaps bring the elbow up, or rotate the blade to the right so it's more vertical? Also, her feet look a little too small, although that's not necessarily a problem.
Overall, a lovely piece. I honestly think it looks nice without a background, but do what you want. Wonderful work, keep it up!

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:iconflynfreako:
the hands should be a little bigger, but i love the character design and pose :D

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:star: Flying Koi?:star:
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:iconxhidden-dreamzx:
thanks! I'm not good with proportioning. The head is always bigger than the body, haha.

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"A great calligrapher does not blame the brush." -Fuji (Tennis no Ojisama)

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:iconflynfreako:
lol, yeah it's a difficult thing to get used to :D i always used to have trouble with the legs...

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