Yay, my first submission. Well, this was the first drawing I managed to finish coloring, haha. She's suppose to be a character in a manga I'm working on (but I'm probably gonna modify her a little) I wanted to add a background but it turned sorta crappy so I didn't want to waste my time.
Ok, you mentioned wanting concrit, so here goes.
First off, BEAUTIFUL coloring. Really supurb. Also, I love the character design, and the linework is wonderfully smooth and clean. Dyniamic pose as well, and much love for the hair.
Only thing I would keep in mind in future: the hands look a bit akward, especially the one in front of her chest. Her wrist looks like it would be in an uncomfortable position. Perhaps bring the elbow up, or rotate the blade to the right so it's more vertical? Also, her feet look a little too small, although that's not necessarily a problem.
Overall, a lovely piece. I honestly think it looks nice without a background, but do what you want. Wonderful work, keep it up!
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AHHH!!! Grandma how many times do I have to tell you, close the door when you taking a shower!
*shudders Then leaves for therapy*
looks really good
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I shot the Ice cream man!!!!
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First off, BEAUTIFUL coloring. Really supurb. Also, I love the character design, and the linework is wonderfully smooth and clean. Dyniamic pose as well, and much love for the hair.
Only thing I would keep in mind in future: the hands look a bit akward, especially the one in front of her chest. Her wrist looks like it would be in an uncomfortable position. Perhaps bring the elbow up, or rotate the blade to the right so it's more vertical? Also, her feet look a little too small, although that's not necessarily a problem.
Overall, a lovely piece. I honestly think it looks nice without a background, but do what you want. Wonderful work, keep it up!
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You Sir, Cake or Death?
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My old art -> ~flynfreakoarchives
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"A great calligrapher does not blame the brush." -Fuji (Tennis no Ojisama)
Peter: Oh my god, Brian, there's a message in my Alphabits. It says, 'Oooooo.'
Brian: Peter, those are Cheerios.
--Family Guy
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My old art -> ~flynfreakoarchives
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